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edits and improvements.

from 2018 - present

Editing Old Stories

I believe that it is critical for strong journalists and writers to maximize their efforts through a corrective retrospective lens. So here are some of the edits I would make to stories I have written in the past. Please click on a story to read the edits.

Issue 1.1 of The Octave

As the contents of the very first issue of the magazine and my first issue as Editor-in-Chief, the pages encased in the display to the right are pivotal in my career as a journalist. And though there is a multitude of improvements I could have made, I proudly present Volume 1, Issue 1 of The Octave.

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